Thursday, 4 February 2010

Additional Dialogue

After looking at our audience feedback we decided to add some extra dialogue to the opening narrative sequence. We decided to do this because the feedback suggested that the opening was too quiet and this made it boring.

The dialogue will be added to the third scene in the sequence to flesh out the narrative of the couple having issues & to explain more clearly why the girl decides to slap the singer & leave.

We will also be adding some sound effects to the first part of the sequence to explain why the singer leaves. We may also add an audible sigh to make the girl's reaction clearer.

We will be recording the dialogue sometime next week.